Thursday, November 22, 2007

Height of indolence

I wish I could fall in love again
It was indeed draining,
But it was never indifferent
I wish I could fall in love again

I wish I could relive my past
It was indeed painful
But it was never so confusing
I wish I could relive my past

I wish I could break the jinx.
I really want to get out of
this engulfing loneliness
I wish I could break the jinx

I wish I could enjoy my life
Because living it seriously,
made me rather unromantic
I wish I could enjoy my life

I wish I could love me more
I feel I am a ruthless critic
I am indeed not that bad
I wish I could love me more

10 Comments:

Blogger Movie Mazaa said...

'I wish I cud love me more...'

Wah!
Am speechless!

6:56 PM  
Blogger Shades said...

I too feel so..!
:)

11:41 PM  
Blogger Sridevi said...

As if you will not fall in love later
As if future is never going to be better than past
As if omens are a no to you
As if you wont be able to enjoy life ever again
As if you are not going to love yourself anymore

As a poem...good rhyming!!!
Poem also reciprocates happiness
Not pains alone...

You fall in love when you open your eyes to find your adorer
Life appears beautiful when you make the world live beautifully
Omens follow you through out when you are in the truest spirits
Life becomes a celebration when you
enjoy the serious living
And you will love yourself more and love the universe

"Accept situation as it is"!

8:50 AM  
Blogger sri said...

All the Best :)

11:25 PM  
Blogger How do we know said...

exactly my thots! strange that this should hit me last night and then ur blog should happen todayt!

1:11 AM  
Blogger neermathalam said...

@veluvetta
:)
@shades of twilight...
same pinch not a back pinch...
:)...thanks
@sridevi
though you are atleast half a foot shorter than me...sometimes i feel u are really a solid one foot taller than me...so easy for you to say and practice so tough for a person like me...
@snigda...
welcome 2 ma lighthouse...r u sripurna..?? thanks..
@how do we know
how do we know that your majesty too thought the same...;)anyway i stole your thoughts last night....:)
jus kidding..i was trying an use in sentence... jokes apart...thanks a lot...

3:33 AM  
Blogger Unknown said...

I fall in love with everything!...
The weather, food, some new place I visit... and I love myself too much!way too much!!!
I dont think i have a problem here then! ;)

Nice one...
:)

12:58 PM  
Blogger neermathalam said...

@neetha

Lucky you !!!

11:40 PM  
Blogger SuperHypersonic said...

Very interesting. I esp. liked these lines...
It was indeed draining,
But it was never indifferent.

Hope you find yourself and hope you love youself [more] for realization of self is the beginning of true love :)

4:06 PM  
Blogger mirage said...

Lovely poem.Nice to read it.

3:20 PM  

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